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My first dota video in General Discussion
death to the fire nation

    Hey guys, please check out my first Dota video. I would appreciate any feedback and suggestions!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C_eqze3Lzg

    Seoulmate

      -don't show your cursor
      -make it look smoother
      -no one understands a 30 seconds intro of random stuff fading in and out
      -don't leave the same boring text up for 10 seconds straight
      -don't leave the camera so zoomed out
      -don't show the replay timeline
      -just show the actual play, using fancy angles confuse us
      -what's up with 1:38 to 2:06 just showing trash talk
      -don't leave the replay options up
      -don't show the hud at all actually if you're trying to make it dramatic with your music
      -3:20 to 3:50 is just a black screen with a single sentence. make that part shorter.